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     A baseball player must master several skillsFirst, a baseball player needs good eyes to see all kinds of balls, so he or she can hit the baseball and run to the first base. If a baseball player can not see and hit a very fast ball or a curve ball that was thrown by an opposing pitcher, his or her team will lose a chance for a run. Second, a baseball player must run fast and arrive at the base before the baseball. If a base ball player can not run fast, he or she will miss the chance to score points. Finally, a baseball player must have good responses for any situation. For example, when an opponent bobbles the ball, he or she must quickly decide whether to run to the next base or stay on the base. If a baseball player does not have good responses to solve any situations, he or she will lose an opportunity of winning the game. In conclusion, a baseball player needs to have good hitting, fast running, and good responses.


# Another time, I would suggest using the plural (baseball players), and then ‘they’ rather than the noun. This would avoid sounding repetitive and would also avoid the awkward ‘he or she’ structure. (Plurals are very usual for general statements.)

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